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Betrayal.

Written by Pirkid on June 5, 2009
At Least I Learned From Her

Look with your eyes, see with your mind,
the words of another, are easily disguised.
Learn from mistakes, continue with grace,
Close your eyes to find light in this place.

Hold your hands open, but be ready to fall,
for betray runs deep, you must try to stand tall.
The whispers will linger in the back of your head,
The chatter of babble of thoughts others have said.

These words of regret, you must learn to ignore,
for this message of doubt will bring no rapport.
I try to find balance, instead find I am lost,
A path that's forgotten, a line never crossed.

Depressive reflection, new fears of rejection,
what person can say that they feel no repression?
A light found in darkness, a doctrine of truth,
they follow it blindly, they fear life of couth,
A sadness I see that she's wasted her youth.




When you open the doors of emotion, be prepared to have it slammed in your face.



~Pir <3

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Fri Jun 05, 2009 04:57 AM +

168 words.

 
 
Fri Jun 05, 2009 05:02 AM +

Ooooh, poetry category.

 
 
Fri Jun 05, 2009 05:03 AM +

I have a feeling it should be 'betrayal'.

But nice rhyming skillz, Pir. ;D

 
 
Fri Jun 05, 2009 05:05 AM +

Ezyan said: I have a feeling it should be 'betrayal'.

But nice rhyming skillz, Pir. ;D


I made up composition on the spot. XD
I like Betrayal better. :3

*copyrights*

 
 
Fri Jun 05, 2009 05:07 AM +

I noticed when you had the title "Composition" that the 's' looked like an inverted 'z' in the "Latest Blogs" section. Just thought I'd let you know. :(

 
 
Fri Jun 05, 2009 05:27 AM [Edited once ] +

Oh, lol, I didn't mean the poem I meant the word 'betray' should be 'betrayal' in your poem. XDDD You know that thing where you assume people know what you're talking about? Yeah, I have that to the max. /irony

But I'm glad you like it anyway? xP

 
 
Fri Jun 05, 2009 05:40 AM +

Ezyan said: Oh, lol, I didn't mean the poem I meant the word 'betray' should be 'betrayal' in your poem. XDDD You know that thing where you assume people know what you're talking about? Yeah, I have that to the max. /irony

But I'm glad you like it anyway? xP


INDEED.

And meh, I'm keeping it nonetheless. :P

 
 
Fri Jun 05, 2009 05:41 AM +

Something happened, Pir?

 
 
Fri Jun 05, 2009 05:00 PM +

lol dat gurl dat luv u u shuld liek om nom nom her

 
 
Sat Jun 06, 2009 12:54 AM +

Pir, on other sites are you known as Nightbane...?

 
 
Sat Jun 06, 2009 01:35 AM +

Rhyming is easy as hell. Lol...

I made up this poem about Romeo and Juliet in English class. It's awesome.

 
 
Sat Jun 06, 2009 01:45 AM +

Blackboy0 said: Pir, on other sites are you known as Nightbane...?


Um..no. I have a lot of other names though. I have Shadowbane.

Isn't that a WoW boss?

 
 
Sat Jun 06, 2009 02:13 AM +

Yes, but I know a guy who's username is Nightbane and he had a girl "betray" him too.

Except he went about it a different way than writing a poem... :\

 
 
Sat Jun 06, 2009 02:36 AM +

That poem made me

JIZZ, IN, MY PANTS

 
 
Sat Jun 06, 2009 02:49 AM +

Spade said: That poem made me

JIZZ, IN, MY PANTS
Haha, my friend and I were talking about that song the other day.

 

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