I like the way you right write.

Like:
At the farm I saw Amy. I thought she was fine when I saw her at the SDFC, but it broke my heart to see how much she had changed since the last time I saw her. She had scars around her neck and back, and had bruises on her face. She was real quiet. Hardly said a word or even looked up from the strings she was spinning. I got a chance and we made eye contact for a minute and I saw how empty she was inside. Living and working here and experiencing the same gruesome things I went through was too much for her, even if they did wipe her mind before. The family she was a servant to took delight in tormenting her.


It feels real.