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New story that is yet to be titled.

Written by Lithium on December 22, 2009
This be an introduction.

The man took a shot of vodka, grimacing as it burned down his throat. Tonight would be a night of no regrets. He slammed the shot glass down on the hard wood table. Was he drinking to forget? Or drinking to remember? Who knows? He surely didn't.
He poured another glass, and downed it. This time, it hardly phased him. He reached across the table and picked up his knife. He touched the tip with his finger and it bled. The stained crimson dripped into the vodka bottle, and within seconds, the vodka had gone completely red. He watched as several others in the bar gave him menacing looks. He simply gave a threatening glare back.
He got up and paid for the alcohol, knife in hand. He gripped it tightly, and walked out the door with a swagger. His blade hungered for flesh.
There would be blood tonight.

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Tue Dec 22, 2009 04:38 AM +

:3 me likey

 
 
Tue Dec 22, 2009 05:38 AM +

Menacing :D

i also likey

 
 
Tue Dec 22, 2009 04:10 PM +

Interesting... intense.... mysterious...

I like. :)

 
 
Tue Dec 22, 2009 06:44 PM +

wow, this was very well explained

I actually visualized it

Almost on par with Naz's stories

 
 
Tue Dec 22, 2009 10:47 PM +

Woot another fanfic!

-=The Nazgul=-

 
 
Wed Dec 23, 2009 12:12 AM +

emo alcoholic murderer win

 
 
Wed Dec 23, 2009 12:36 AM +

Is he Russian? LOL

 
 
Thu Dec 24, 2009 06:01 AM +

This sounds awfully familiar with something I read before...

 
 
Thu Dec 24, 2009 06:35 AM +

Cool, but some slight errors. Crimson is a color, can either be used as noun or adjective, therefore it must be used to describe blood, and not to replace it. I'm not sure why you put 'stained' though. :o

Most of the sentences start with 'he'. You should change it up a little. Add some adverbs or something. :o 'Reaching for the knife..', 'Gently, he pricked...'

Other than that, good job. :o

 
 
Thu Dec 24, 2009 07:13 AM +

The way he used it could be of artistic effect, though I would've said, "The crimson drops hit the vodka..." But Jon's way is good nonetheless.

-=The Nazgul=-

 
 
Fri Dec 25, 2009 07:59 AM +

OMGizzards! Who's he gonna kill?

 

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