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Fan Fiction
Written by Lithium on December 22nd, 2009. Viewed 116 times. 11 comments left. 15 people have liked this blog.
This be an introduction.

The man took a shot of vodka, grimacing as it burned down his throat. Tonight would be a night of no regrets. He slammed the shot glass down on the hard wood table. Was he drinking to forget? Or drinking to remember? Who knows? He surely didn't.
He poured another glass, and downed it. This time, it hardly phased him. He reached across the table and picked up his knife. He touched the tip with his finger and it bled. The stained crimson dripped into the vodka bottle, and within seconds, the vodka had gone completely red. He watched as several others in the bar gave him menacing looks. He simply gave a threatening glare back.
He got up and paid for the alcohol, knife in hand. He gripped it tightly, and walked out the door with a swagger. His blade hungered for flesh.
There would be blood tonight.
Comments
 
4:38 am [Dec 22nd, 2009] +
:3 me likey
 
 
5:38 am [Dec 22nd, 2009] +
Menacing :D

i also likey
 
 
4:10 pm [Dec 22nd, 2009] +
Interesting... intense.... mysterious...

I like. :)
 
 
6:44 pm [Dec 22nd, 2009] +
wow, this was very well explained

I actually visualized it

Almost on par with Naz's stories
 
 
10:47 pm [Dec 22nd, 2009] +
Woot another fanfic!

-=The Nazgul=-
 
 
12:12 am [Dec 23rd, 2009] +
emo alcoholic murderer win
 
 
12:36 am [Dec 23rd, 2009] +
Is he Russian? LOL
 
 
6:01 am [Dec 24th, 2009] +
This sounds awfully familiar with something I read before...
 
 
6:35 am [Dec 24th, 2009] +
Cool, but some slight errors. Crimson is a color, can either be used as noun or adjective, therefore it must be used to describe blood, and not to replace it. I'm not sure why you put 'stained' though. :o

Most of the sentences start with 'he'. You should change it up a little. Add some adverbs or something. :o 'Reaching for the knife..', 'Gently, he pricked...'

Other than that, good job. :o
 
 
7:13 am [Dec 24th, 2009] +
The way he used it could be of artistic effect, though I would've said, "The crimson drops hit the vodka..." But Jon's way is good nonetheless.

-=The Nazgul=-
 
 
7:59 am [Dec 25th, 2009] +
OMGizzards! Who's he gonna kill?
 
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